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19-11-2018, 09:02 #1
CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019
Last edited by HellKitty; 19-11-2018 at 09:17.
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19-11-2018, 09:03 #2
Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019
Last edited by HellKitty; 19-11-2018 at 09:17.
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19-11-2018, 14:40 #3
Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019
Last edited by HellKitty; 19-11-2018 at 14:47.
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19-11-2018, 18:34 #4
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19-11-2018, 18:46 #5
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Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019
Although I'm not a grammar Nazi, there are a few errors that I think need correction.
1st sentence: hi jacking should be hijacking
2nd sentence: Its should be It's
3rd sentence: comma needed after break, flow needs to be flows.
4th sentence: wife needs to be removed, unless there's 2 wives
5th sentence: needs to be a comma between gun and and.
Needs a full stop after family.
6th sentence: apostrophe needs to be removed between I am.
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20-11-2018, 07:11 #6
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20-11-2018, 11:07 #7
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