CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

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Originally Posted by HellKitty

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Rhymes nicely

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Originally Posted by HellKitty

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Although I'm not a grammar Nazi, there are a few errors that I think need correction.
1st sentence: hi jacking should be hijacking
2nd sentence: Its should be It's
3rd sentence: comma needed after break, flow needs to be flows.
4th sentence: wife needs to be removed, unless there's 2 wives:g:
5th sentence: needs to be a comma between gun and and.
Needs a full stop after family.
6th sentence: apostrophe needs to be removed between I am.

Hi there BBT - these are entries into a competition - we (GOF) will "not" be editing any of the wording of entries. Please look at the message - this is what is important here, not language.

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Originally Posted by BBT

Although I'm not a grammar Nazi, there are a few errors that I think need correction.
1st sentence: hi jacking should be hijacking
2nd sentence: Its should be It's
3rd sentence: comma needed after break, flow needs to be flows.
4th sentence: wife needs to be removed, unless there's 2 wives:g:
5th sentence: needs to be a comma between gun and and.
Needs a full stop after family.
6th sentence: apostrophe needs to be removed between I am.

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