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    Default CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

    Last edited by HellKitty; 19-11-2018 at 09:17.

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    Default Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

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    Default Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

    Last edited by HellKitty; 19-11-2018 at 14:47.

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    Default Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

    Quote Originally Posted by HellKitty View Post
    Rhymes nicely

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    Default Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

    Quote Originally Posted by HellKitty View Post
    Although I'm not a grammar Nazi, there are a few errors that I think need correction.
    1st sentence: hi jacking should be hijacking
    2nd sentence: Its should be It's
    3rd sentence: comma needed after break, flow needs to be flows.
    4th sentence: wife needs to be removed, unless there's 2 wives
    5th sentence: needs to be a comma between gun and and.
    Needs a full stop after family.
    6th sentence: apostrophe needs to be removed between I am.

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    Default Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

    Hi there BBT - these are entries into a competition - we (GOF) will "not" be editing any of the wording of entries. Please look at the message - this is what is important here, not language.

    Quote Originally Posted by BBT View Post
    Although I'm not a grammar Nazi, there are a few errors that I think need correction.
    1st sentence: hi jacking should be hijacking
    2nd sentence: Its should be It's
    3rd sentence: comma needed after break, flow needs to be flows.
    4th sentence: wife needs to be removed, unless there's 2 wives
    5th sentence: needs to be a comma between gun and and.
    Needs a full stop after family.
    6th sentence: apostrophe needs to be removed between I am.

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    Default Re: CAMEO ENTRANTS FOR GOF COMPETITION 2019

    E-mail address should read GirlsOnFire@GunOwnersSA.org

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